Persephone: The Sequel to The Labyrinth - Post 1

I'm about to begin working on the second chapter.  This is my current Labyrinth story.  As the name suggests, I am using the myth of Persephone as the bases of the story, but of course having the characters in character.

I am improving my writing as I work on this story.  I plan to at least try and write a few different versions of each chapter before I send it off to my beta and thus updating it.

Visit the following link to read the story:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6075052/1/Persephone_The_Sequel_to_The_Labyrinth